Monday, January 3, 2011

.hallucination of what's real and what's not.


i don't have the desire for anything.
yet.
i don't have things to fight for.
yet.
i don't need to be in-charge of anything.
yet.
i don't need to let myself drowned.
yet.
i don't have to kill myself.
yet.

i just need to get rid of the 'yet'.
now.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 4, 2011 at 5:11 AM

    cut out the "don't" for the first three and "yet" for the latter two.

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  2. .pathetic yet ordinary thoughts.January 4, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    do you think so?

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 4, 2011 at 7:48 AM

    yes. and if you must, cut the "yet" for the first three too thank you.

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